your style reminds me of Mamshmam's, and thats a good thing :)
i thought it was good. just fix a few things and your all good.
Write out what I need to improve
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i enjoyed it
I lold. the art isnt great (though i think that was intentional, lol), but though i dont think the rating is accurate because of some of the nudity.
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