your style reminds me of Mamshmam's, and thats a good thing :)
i thought it was good. just fix a few things and your all good.
Write out what I need to improve
I do not see how bad things
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i enjoyed it
I lold. the art isnt great (though i think that was intentional, lol), but though i dont think the rating is accurate because of some of the nudity.
im gonna have to agree with the NexusTheVoid, if you plan on submitting something, you should at least have it completed. Fix some some things, like the aspect ratio ( the width and height). Dont have all that empty space if your not gonna use it. maybe describe the controls. Newgrounds isnt really a place for tests (im assuming this is a test because it only has one level, if you can call it a level) . If you want to test a game, test it yourself before uploading it.
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